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Long road to travel Dusty summer days Sweat builds between warm hands holding She picked a yellow flower for her hair And danced along the dirty road Without care Many miles to travel Yet we could already be here No destination Running free No one around no landscape to see Roll with me baby she said As she danced down a hillside Ripping her dress Flower petals dropping Trailing where she’s been Spinning around and down Over and over she laughed This world is her playground We danced until the sun has set Making love till the rise again Connected together Passion Binding This world is our Playground She asked am I your Juliet Answered no Stopped in her tracks and she let go I have something to give you she smiled Leaving into the tall grass Blast Running with whipping blades in my eyes Searching for her trail A clearing where she fell Gun in her hand Bleeding heart With a note that read You were my Romeo And I closed my eyes One bullet left Cool metal on sweat Blast Don’t cry Don’t cry ©2014 Tamilyn Love

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Date: 6/30/2014 12:29:00 PM
Hi Tamilyn, this is such a deep powerful write. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/27/2014 3:43:00 AM
Loved it Tamilyn. Especially the innocent passion...Well done
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Date: 6/26/2014 1:58:00 PM
Oh , the tragedy that is classic love... My heart grew heavy reading above Something that hit too close to home Thus deeply I thank you for this poem. A very real and moving read, Tamilyn ! All for Love--Keith
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Tamilyn Love
Date: 3/5/2015 11:52:00 AM
Thank you so much : )
Date: 6/26/2014 1:27:00 PM
Hi Tamilyn this such a great write on the sad complications of love and romance. Well done! I enjoyed reading your work! Warmest regards.
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