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Blarney Castle

I walk the path amid the trees Where footsteps of the past have tread Where ancient stones of Blarney please, Where lips upon the stone are wed. My roots run deep with Irish blood and County Cork's where my folk hale. There Blarney meets where tourists flood to kiss the stone below the rail. Enchanting are the turrets here   bedecked in autumn's vines of red, the little stream that wanders near, and steps to where I'm being led. The Blarney stone at last I see, so bending backwards now to kiss the stone, my friend is holding me. That’s not a mark I want to miss! I have a thought;   I now can say my mouth has touched where many more have touched upon this stone of gray. How many thousands came before? These ancient walls in ruin stand With greater hist'ry than most know, Yet still throngs yield to their command In visitors that come and go. Inside the marrow of my bones, I feel a thrill . Will eloquence Be mine from having kissed this stone? I feel a chill of reverence! For the Partner UP Contest of Shadow Hamilton: Theme: Castles Finished 9/4/2015 By Connie Marcum Wong and Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. I almost feel that I was up there with you.
Schneiter Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Lovely and so much more, Andrea. It makes me even more anxious to visit the Emerald Isle before I take the big Off Ramp. Thank you for sharing it.
Austin Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Hoot mon. Sure and this is a wonderful tribute to the ancient stone. Stirs what little Irish blood I have in me. Love, daver
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Beautiful pen Andrea! I really enjoyed reading your poem. Excellent write!:)A 7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you!:) D
Inman Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Connie and Andrea, beautiful write, great flow and soothing tone.
Williams Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 3:48 AM
Fantastic write. Makes me proud to have Irish blood running through my veins. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Beaufort Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 6:35 PM
Yes, if you feel the change in you from a connection to the past, that is something real. We are all connected to the past in ways almost unimaginable. I am completely touched by the sequence of eloquence in the works of yours I have just read.
Cheema Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 4:44 AM
An amazing write, Andrea! You made me walk to the shores of Blarney and kiss the stone! Congrats! Balveen
A. Sharma Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Wonderful collab Andrea n Connie! Congrats on top place win! Perfect final stanza!
Kimathi Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic WIN Andrea! ;-)
Callus Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Hi Andrea! You delayed posting your entry, but I did manage to read and comment on Connie's page. This is a great collaboration which highlights the abilities of two most talented poets. ~ Big congratulations!! // paul
May Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Beautifully penned ..you two did a fantastic job...Congrats on the win
Walker Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 1:32 PM
You and Connie must be a kindred sister to have written a collaboration that flows so well.
Allison Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 11:30 AM
A fabulous collaboration Andrea it brought back memories as I've visited the castle and kissed the Blarney Stone:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 10:04 AM
congrats Andrea fine poem I kissed the Blarney stone when I was 15 awesome hugs
Nayak Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Hearty congrats on the big win!! A 7!!! An adorable write! Loved it dear Andrea.....beautiful collaborative write....love, Anu:-)
A  Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your - Partner up - contest win. **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:38 AM
What a lovely collaboration poem, Andrea! The rhyme and flow are magnificent. Congratulations to both you and Connie on your top of the podium, well-deserved win! Sandra
Y. Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Andrea, you and Connie penned an outstanding collab. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Pinet Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 4:34 PM
This is a fun poem inspiring an image in the mind of the reader that is instantaneous with the reading. It says a lot without much thought! It rings true and is a joy to read. Emile. #7
Nunez Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 12:00 PM
So lovely...Belated happy birthday, Andie! Sorry I am late for the party...:-)
Muideen Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 11:02 AM
A well and beautiful description. Excellent write Andrea........A.M.
Peranteau Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 10:07 AM
This write is spectacular Andrea! And the fine poet you are ~> I was looking up the word that you first had on your write "turret" on dic.com and went back to your write, you that quick changed it, it actually changed while I was spying on the word turret! That was surely a first for me! Awesome write dear poet! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
Ober Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 9:56 AM
You ladies have outdone yourselves! The rhythm, the flow, the rhymes... Excellent collaboration! Andrea, I've been dealing with many things this past year, but I seem to be over my writer's block now and intend to be around here a lot more :) I hope all is well with you! Your writing is as amazing as ever!
Onclaud Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 6:19 AM
happy birthday, andie... what a graceful piece filled with a sense of devotion..cheers to connie as well!.. huggs
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