Blanket of Fog

thick blanket of fog
                                                       smothers visibility --
                                                            cars pile up
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Novotny Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 11:03 PM
Ah, fog. That chaste cousin to the scourge oof cities. Nice piece. - Chuck
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 7:44 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Kim. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 2:43 PM
Love this haiku, Kim. Many congrats to you too, my friend : )
Johnson Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 4:07 PM
nature takes its course, unforgiven...
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 5:53 PM
oh yes, now that is a haiku with a natural consequence.haha. Let me go see your other one!
Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 5:59 AM
That is a sad one but well written..I hope that no one was hurt..Thanks for stopping by..I think that I have a cold..Sara
Ball Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 9:01 AM
That's for sure. I've seen it so thick you couldn't see more than a foot in front of you. At times like that it's best nnot to drive. God Bless, JB
Stanley Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 11:21 PM
Kim, a wonderful haiku. Reminds so much of the mornings here in southern CA, Greg
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