Blanket of Beauty

From flowers and trees,
The blanket of Spring’s woven;
Seamless in beauty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haniff Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:35 PM
this is truly wonderful..it paint too a lovely picture....lol...nice work!...Maryam*
Edmonds Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 5:30 PM
Lovely description of Spring.
Goombi Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:31 PM
A beautiful blanket it is, nice work
Shahwan Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:06 AM
Awaiting more haiku...All the best.
Devonshire Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 6:04 PM
A delightful perspective on spring's perfection, Raul. Love the way you describe it as a blanket that is "seamless in beauty." Beautiful!
Esquire Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Dear Raul, The Haiku Sensei has done it again I'll just take this Beautiful "blanket of Spring" and go to bed dreaming of its Beauty ALWAYS ...HG
Lopez Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 5:16 PM
i love laying in the blanket of nature! this a perfect 575 .......great job!
Martin Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Another amazing haiku for the master himself. You are great at these. Tyler
Gass Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 9:58 AM
This is such a lovely landscape, Raul! We are slowly moving toward the Spring here. Thank you for the ice view today! Love, Robin
Neal Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Amazing imagery, again nice warok. DN
Neal Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 2:31 PM
beautiful blanket it is, loved this simple write. Love Elizabeth
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March 30, 2009 at 12:07 PM
What a wonderful scene you paint with words in this one. Sounds beautiful to me. The snow is falling here again, hoping it won't affect the flooding in the area too much. Thank you for your congrats. Keep on writing! Karen
Chircop Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 9:40 AM
lovely write-charma
Higgins Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 4:21 AM
This is written so beautifully...well done haiku.
De La Keur Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 2:49 AM
Wow that was good, I love it.....Aleera
Torres Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 2:43 AM
awsome jaja it would be cool if we could put yours and mine together lol>>>josh
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