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Blanket of Beauty

From flowers and trees, The blanket of Spring’s woven; Seamless in beauty.

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Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 4/6/2009 3:35:00 PM

this is truly wonderful..it paint too a lovely picture....lol...nice work!...Maryam*

Steve Edmonds

Date: 4/5/2009 5:30:00 PM

Lovely description of Spring.

Chris Goombi

Date: 4/3/2009 8:31:00 PM

A beautiful blanket it is, nice work

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/3/2009 8:06:00 AM

Awaiting more haiku...All the best.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/2/2009 6:04:00 PM

A delightful perspective on spring's perfection, Raul. Love the way you describe it as a blanket that is "seamless in beauty." Beautiful!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/2/2009 4:07:00 PM

Dear Raul, The Haiku Sensei has done it again I'll just take this Beautiful "blanket of Spring" and go to bed dreaming of its Beauty ALWAYS ...HG

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/31/2009 5:16:00 PM

i love laying in the blanket of nature! this a perfect 575 .......great job!

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/31/2009 12:55:00 PM

Another amazing haiku for the master himself. You are great at these. Tyler

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/31/2009 9:58:00 AM

This is such a lovely landscape, Raul! We are slowly moving toward the Spring here. Thank you for the ice view today! Love, Robin

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/30/2009 3:28:00 PM

Amazing imagery, again nice warok. DN

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/30/2009 2:31:00 PM

beautiful blanket it is, loved this simple write. Love Elizabeth

Date: 3/30/2009 12:07:00 PM

What a wonderful scene you paint with words in this one. Sounds beautiful to me. The snow is falling here again, hoping it won't affect the flooding in the area too much. Thank you for your congrats. Keep on writing! Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/30/2009 9:40:00 AM

lovely write-charma

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/30/2009 4:21:00 AM

This is written so beautifully...well done haiku.

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 3/30/2009 2:49:00 AM

Wow that was good, I love it.....Aleera

Josh Torres

Date: 3/30/2009 2:43:00 AM

awsome jaja it would be cool if we could put yours and mine together lol>>>josh