Blanket

Blanket

A blanket of rain 
Snuffs out the licking fire
Leaving an ashen trail
And smoke coiling
Up in the air. 

A blanket of night
Shows a little ember 
Shaking its way through
The remaining warmth.

A blanket of stars
To cheer its effort 
The tiny light stoked 
Up by the wind. 

Through the blanket
Of ashes, the tiny fire waking up 
Into a phoenix, it flies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Tuazon Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 12:48 AM
This is beautiful Lily.
Tuazon Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:30 AM
Di nada Lily.
Nguyen Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Thank you Maris for enjoying my poem!!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 1:24 AM
Ah, Lili, a wonderful metaphoric masterpiece. What a terrific first poem! Welcome to Poetry Soup my friend.
Nguyen Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:50 AM
Thank you, Caren! You make my heart fly.
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