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Blanket

Blanket A blanket of rain Snuffs out the licking fire Leaving an ashen trail And smoke coiling Up in the air. A blanket of night Shows a little ember Shaking its way through The remaining warmth. A blanket of stars To cheer its effort The tiny light stoked Up by the wind. Through the blanket Of ashes, the tiny fire waking up Into a phoenix, it flies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/31/2020 12:48:00 AM
This is beautiful Lily.
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Maris Warrior Tuazon
Date: 9/28/2020 3:30:00 AM
Di nada Lily.
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Huyen Nguyen
Date: 8/31/2020 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Maris for enjoying my poem!!
Date: 1/9/2019 1:24:00 AM
Ah, Lili, a wonderful metaphoric masterpiece. What a terrific first poem! Welcome to Poetry Soup my friend.
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Huyen Nguyen
Date: 1/9/2019 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! You make my heart fly.

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