Blank Mind

It's unclear why things are hard to be shared,
Unclear why its like a fight
And every fight: lost.
Lost because its hard to share?
Or lost because a good fight is never proposed?

Once more the fight is at hand.
Will this be the next loss?
Or will this be a victory, finally?
A victory that is needed, by you: me.

Feeble thoughts are also sometimes hard to share.
Why, when they're feeble: small?
Has little meaning? 
Why so hard?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 10, 2012 at 12:12 PM
great write Lajorne,the nature of man,secrecy
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