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Blank lines The palate stairs Back at me Grunting as I fill it up Like an old staircase It groans under the weight Of the human in the words

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Date: 8/7/2017 2:16:00 PM
Hi, Nice poem and imagery. Suggestions: palate stares? human on the words? Cheers
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