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The palate stairs
Back at me 
Grunting as I fill it up
Like an old staircase 
It groans under the weight
Of the human in the words

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/7/2017 2:16:00 PM
Hi, Nice poem and imagery. Suggestions: palate stares? human on the words? Cheers
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