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Latoya got her new man now 
Her new beau, wow
He calls her babe!!! Aww

I don't see Latoya anymore
We used to be like two peas in a pond
In those days
Well, just a few months ago
We were inseparable, girl!
Watched movies together, dinner and lunch, shopping 
          Etc

Her new man came after my old man
Me and my old man, nothing has changed, same s#@t
Her new man got her some diamonds for her five fingers, I guess he has the dough
Word!
Well, me and the story of my rings, trust me there are no diamonds, 
Is a story of another day 

My life goes blank
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Sad to lose a friend over something like that!! True story? I enjoyed the read.
Hunjeri Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 5:46 AM
Actually most of my writings are based on true life stories. Thank you Andrea.
Hunjeri Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 5:45 AM
Its true and me my friend are still good friends. I was actually trying to write this in a fun way. You know it has happened, its life and its okay. I actually laugh about it when I read this.
Gray Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 12:21 PM
Enjoyed this piece Njeri!. Best wishes my friend!.
Hunjeri Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 5:40 AM
Thank you so much Bill. I appreciate your visit.
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