Blame It On Winter-W

Wild winter disguised
Sends messages to senses
Blame not my madness

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8th place

The season I have chosen is winter.

For contest Seasons Senryu by Linda-Marie Bariana
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 26, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Interesting write on madness, Dr- ty for your comment on Poet Tree- but,,, will Brian feel the same Hmmm
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" DR. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:35 PM
Interesting perception of senses sharing the same space as madness. Makes you think about the first line more and more each time you read it! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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June 19, 2010 at 5:13 PM
congratulations on your win with this thought provoking one! LUv, Andrea
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June 19, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Nice use of alliteration and imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen
Hales Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Great write !! sarah Thank you for all your kind words on my work x
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:08 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my contest with this wonderful write.. so appreciate your support of my contests constantly.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
Hill Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 6:58 PM
The winter madness, I know much how this may feel being born and raised in Minnesota. Great write, thanks for the kind words on mine :)
Neels Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Great write Dr. Ram, best wishes for the contest - rgds WN
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June 14, 2010 at 2:49 PM
great write!..enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 7:17 AM
thanks for your answer to my blog. You should try one day the vanilla flavored tootsie rolls!! LUv, Andrea
Harrison Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 8:14 PM
Oh, I love this one. Great job.
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June 13, 2010 at 7:14 PM
Dr. Ram, the Bard! Yes, it reaches for the Bard and not in an arch way, but honestly. I like it. It reads like a minor quote from the 12th Night or the Tempest. You have the poet's trace on yourbrain and in your soul. Thank you and regards, Gerard.
Anderson Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Dr. Ram, thnx for your comments left on my writes. Always appreciated! Jimmy
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June 13, 2010 at 9:33 AM
Great write Dr. Mehta. My best wishes for your contest. And many thanks for your precious comments on my new Poem 'Lines Life and our Faith in God'. Love and best wishes always......Ravindra......Dr. R Mehta
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June 13, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Thanks for your comment on my recent posting! I like "Blame it on winter....I like this!
Stella Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 6:57 AM
oh yes glad I stopped by and checked it out this made me smile for winter does free da brain esp up here in minnesota where it can reach 60-80 below yikes this should do well in the contest also thanks for your kind comment on mine
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June 13, 2010 at 3:51 AM
Nicely presented "Winter-Haiku", Dr. Ram! Wish you success in Linda's contest and thank you for your kind comments! Have a nice Sunday...Gert
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June 12, 2010 at 9:41 PM
I like yours too. Kind of personification like mine too! Good luck in the contest, Dr. Ram!
Goff Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 8:42 PM
feelings of winter, perfect! Doc! and thanks for your kind support! jimbo
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 8:06 PM
nice effort here! And thanks so much for all your kind words lately! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Interesting Senryu that should do well in the contest...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Milgate Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Very nice, blame not my madness, very nice. Thanks for your comments. They are valued.
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June 12, 2010 at 4:27 PM
Nice one! The last line was kind of a surprise which I liked. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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June 12, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Wow...this is excellent, and thought provoking. Nice one, Dr. Ram! ~ Carrie
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