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April 8, 2024
Placed 1st: Babel, Bait, Blame, Blank Check Poetry Contest
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Blame

Quote: A man can fail many times, but he isn’t a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.
John Burroughs
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Inspired by life’s goals, winners are intuitively aware,
A loss is but a steppingstone, not a reason to despair; 
Again and again, with certitude they play the game,
For triumph, they envision, is written in every name.

They never seek to blame others, for own mistakes,
Instead, they course-correct, averting heart-breaks,
Re-learning, deep in introspection, as they re-assess;
Ameliorating ways of failures, reaching for success.

When life is perturbed in adversities, they fear not,
Cognizant~ anything worthwhile must be hard-fought;
Summoning conquering ways, every failure taught,
To attain ultimate milestone, reveries of victory sought.

They accept, they advance, when things go wrong,
Strumming theme winsome, emanating from life’s song,
Echoing a pledge revered, treasured for quite long;
Avowing~ to them, the reigns of future shall belong.

Dreams of passion, dreams coveted, refuse to die,
For resolutely their objectives, driven believers vie; 
Until triumphantly, bells-elated, of success chime,
Trumping sad sighs of failures, defeated over time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Manley Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Its only when we realize we only compete against our own last best that we really improve. I love your poem.
Eslinger Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:21 PM
Vijay, i gave this poem several readings & its worthiness & truth deepened. I know this subject is important to you & should be moreso to us all. Very happy to see it awarded a win! Stay well!
Venkataraman Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 9:37 AM
A nice poem !
Beaufort Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 10:06 AM
Vijay, this poem holds a lot of value. Blame can often be a sign of something wrong in ourselves. It's fun to put things in perspective. You're allowing me to think about myself. I always liked taking things apart and putting them back together. If there was something I wanted to create, I would search the ends of the earth to figure out how to make it happen. We're actually quite lucky to live in a world with so many resources available to us and failures are not defeats.
Maverick Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 1:43 AM
And so we must forge on.' Great message from You here Vijay.'
Xiang Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 5:40 PM
Very inspirational. You make me pause before I blame others for my short-comings. Thank you.
Venkataraman Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 7:18 AM
A nice poem !
Williams Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:23 AM
So many play the blame game.I've learned through several hard knocks not to fear adversity but to face it head-on, and you're so right. So many great entrepreneurs do learn from their failures and refuse to blame, with unyielding determination, letting victory be the ultimate prize. This is a great, well-thought-out poem of yours, dear Vijay...Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 6:30 AM
Very well said, Vijay! They never seek to blame others, for own mistakes, Instead, they course-correct, averting heart-breaks…Also love the quote!
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 4:58 AM
A verse of wisdom Vijay, brilliant writing, stunning vocabulary. Greetings from Crete. Tom
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:15 AM
You are having fun again, Tom. Enjoy your visit to fabulous destinations. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.
Theraven Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 8:07 PM
Vijay, Found something to hold on to in a poem called Blame. Seems all worthwhile things are never easily obtained. Have enough fulfilled in the journey, life's destination is waiting all the same. -Richard
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:14 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Richard. Glad to see you again, my friend. Many that for your support and your FAVE.
Baker Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 6:12 PM
I see below this poem was a contest winner, my friend. Congratulations on your win! I see why it won; it is going on my FAVs list. Excellent poetry and wisdom filled advice on how to live a positive and successful life. Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your amazing poetry, my dear friend. Bill
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, my friend. Your thoughtful insights are much valued and so is your FAVE, Bill. You are always so very kind.
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Thank again Sara--much appreciate.
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 6:23 AM
- Wisdom in your verses, Vijay...wonderful poem as always :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Much appreciate, Anne-Lise--many thanks.
Callus Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 6:20 AM
That is an excellent quote, Vijay, and so is your wisely written poem. True men admit their failures and faults, and when they fall it is up to them to find new strength and rise. ~ Best regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Thank you Paul--glad to see you again. Much appreciate your kind remarks.
May Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 8:27 PM
"The bells of success triumphantly chime", Well penned Vijay
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:09 AM
Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 7:30 AM
I seem to have missed this beautiful poem. Very intricate and deep reflections. Best for a win.
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:09 AM
Thank you Victor--much appreciate.
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 1:09 PM
so true, Vijay. I dislike so much when people think of anyone to blame but themselves!
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:09 AM
Much appreciate you visiting and commenting, Andrea. Many thanks for your insights.
Nicole Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 7:30 AM
' A loss is but a steppingstone, not a reason to despair. ' So true. Those that are truly honest with themselves, learn from mistakes they've made, instead of blaming someone else. Your thoughts are uplifting and inspiring. My best to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:08 AM
Your insights are on mark, as always, my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 6:29 AM
Wow Vijay! This is very positive, wise and inspirational! A special poem this is and important for anyone to read. Excellent! A Fave for me :)
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Your visit to my page and supportive comments are always valued, my friend. Many thanks for your FAVE, Heidi. Thank you for being there.
Rose  Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 5:00 AM
Vijay, I wish everyone adopted to this philosophy of living. Dear poet, how easy it is to point the finger when things go wrong. Thanks for always sharing such altruistic poems of grace and self love. :)
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Always a joy to see you on my page, my friend. Many thanks, Vienna--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Gentile Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 4:02 AM
Vijay, your lines are nothing short of inspirational! I don't think I have ever read anything so powerfully motivating! I see a winner here!! Good Luck in the contest and happy Tuesday!!
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:04 AM
Much appreciate, my friend. Many thanks for your kind remarks, Mike.
Severo Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 12:55 AM
I blame you for such wonderful poetry! xoxo
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Thank you Aurore--your presence on my page is much appreciated.
George Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 7:56 PM
"Anything worthwhile must be hard-fought. I very much agree with you Vi. A great piece this is. Putting the blame on others makes us weak. I love when people take responsibility for what they did, regardless of whether they are proud of it or not. Acceptance is a step forward to success.
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:02 AM
Your analysis is on mark, Tonye. Glad you visited. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.
Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:35 PM
Vijay, your fantastic poem contains a positive, truthful lesson that everyone needs to learn. Beautifully expressed, and a wonderful contest contender. Good luck!
Pandit Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:00 AM
So nice to hear that, my friend. Much appreciate your presence on my page, Many thanks, Evelyn.
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