Peter Hamilton Poet Prose Poetry

Blake Lively

Not much can match Blake Lively in nineteen sixties attire.
I'm looking for a path way to hire
That leads me to some type of perfection
That is emulated
In that image
In the scene
I am amazed by how serene
A woman can be.
Like my fondness of trees
A special one makes it easier to breathe
In this highly polluted world
A girl of your dreams is also Lady Liberty in discreet
She saved you from your long search
And your long absence of something greater.

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Skat A June 16, 2016 at 6:45 AM Nice to see this one again Peter...skat

Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2015 at 3:23 AM - Hello Peter :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A October 21, 2015 at 12:08 AM Peter, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A October 19, 2015 at 11:19 PM Peter, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Edlynn Nau October 19, 2015 at 12:48 AM Hmmmm! That last line is a twist! So lovely and lively and thinkable and I'm trying to see the women you picked (or the one that chose you). This was a clever read. Good one! E. Nau