Blacktwig Seedling

The apple of your eye?
That compliment is dead.
Instead, you left me dry,
Through cored-out tears I shed.
And now the cage I call my heart,
Or perhaps a fortress, rather
Cold and in the darkness now,
For this I thank you, Father.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Heartfelt, and deep emotions emerge as I read Annie....:)
Chappell Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 4:25 PM
strong write here saddened but very powerful
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