James Edward Lee Sr. Poet Pantoum

Blackness Lit Stalled

At midnight black light rules 
Seems as though daylight woes
Eliminator sprites 
lighted
Seems as though daylight woes
Blackness stilled
lighted
Motions stalled can't see to walk 
Blackness stilled 
Eliminator sprites 
Motion stalled 
Can't see to walk 
At midnight black light rules


1/11/22
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2022

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L Milton Hankins January 12, 2022 at 11:54 AM Interesting poem, James, but it doesn't quite measure up to the rules for a Pantoum. I found Poetry Soup's "Types of Poems" helpful.