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Blackness Lit Stalled

At midnight black light rules Seems as though daylight woes Eliminator sprites lighted Seems as though daylight woes Blackness stilled lighted Motions stalled can't see to walk Blackness stilled Eliminator sprites Motion stalled Can't see to walk At midnight black light rules
1/11/22 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2022

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Date: 1/12/2022 11:54:00 AM
Interesting poem, James, but it doesn't quite measure up to the rules for a Pantoum. I found Poetry Soup's "Types of Poems" helpful.
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