Blackened Silhouettes Fill the Sky

Gloomy was my mood already, my energy tapped
The shades refused any effort to let the sun in.
I had become a zombie all day emotionally strapped
Ready to snap and snarl without knowing why
The dog knew today would not be a win-win
I peeked to watch blackened silhouettes fill the sky
They appeared angry, unforgiving, and furiously mad
I opened the door once to let the snooty cat in
The three of us curled up in our blankets, determined to be sad
To waste a whole day like this is probably a sin

Written for Linda Loo’s Rhyme Poetry Contest
June 25, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations, Caren, on your win.. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`*
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June 29, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Caren - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! Enjoyed this thoroughly, (and I can so relate!). :-) <3
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June 30, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Thank you for the visit and the read.
Gentry Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Congratulations on your win. Some days are just like that... :)
Scars Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 7:11 AM
great last line lovely poem from a lovely lady :) thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
Krutsinger Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Laura. I appreciate it. I know these contests are difficult to judge.
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June 25, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Wholly relatable. Except for the cat bit. ;) So well expressed, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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June 26, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Giggles, nope. I do know some of course!
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June 26, 2018 at 4:49 AM
Thank you Maureen. I am guessing you do not have a snooty cat.
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