Blacken Morsels; the Shadow Dines

An eerie shadow in the night; comes hither to your door;
Each time you whisper save me please; it angers even more.
    It seems to know your name somehow; and it calls as if you’re owned;
    And the terror puts a fear in you; to the marrow of your bones.

You see it at your windows; yet you hear it at your door;
An icy chill comes over you; from your feet that touch the floor.
    Your instinct tells you break and run; but you’re frozen there in place;
    And you know it somehow sees you there; as it laughs all in your face.

From a place you’ve never known; a piercing scream is heard;
The sound is coming from your mouth; crying words that seem absurd.
   "That’s what I’ve been waiting for" (he says); as it grabs you from behind;
    As the water falls all to the floor; you know you’ve lost your mind.

So now you know you’ve lost it; but are you going to die;
How did this horror find you; and more so tell you why?
   Suddenly it’s over; and you’re staring at the lights;
   You’re calling it a nightmare; but you’re not sure that is right.

The chill is all around you; but you think he went away;
But the marrow in your bones still jells; and the fear is there to stay.
    Who says there isn’t evil; who says it wasn’t real;
    That’s the nature of its game; it eats what you conceal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/15/2008 8:50:00 PM
Wow,this along with so much of your work just grips you. Very dark of course and so entertaning. I wonder if I'm not again missing the point.... probably.Thankyou. Your pal, Bev
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