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Blacked Heart

Blacked Heart Within the blackness blissed lies the love that has been missed For within the miasma mist a darkish deprived heart does resist Of the silenced sounds heard escapes a lonely wounded word Of the slumbered souls spurred amidst the dormant eyes blurred Amongst the burials buried blind my lamenting love is left behind In a clustered cave confined echoes of a manqué mind maligned For in a cathedral chastised chant my thoughts in a ravaging rant In a primal punitive pant bled emotions erected in a penile implant Where my apocalyptic asylum stands ruling tyrant of sin commands And demons dream of wastelands I parochially pray with idle hands My heart a deeper dark by the hour is left in a storm a fragile flower Upon this shattering shower ardently abandoned with a dying dour. Music by Enigma - 'Amen' June.26.2018 Abandon 2 Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

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Date: 7/28/2018 12:18:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win. :)
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Date: 7/27/2018 7:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2018 9:09:00 AM
Excellent writing, i’m also an enigma fan.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/26/2018 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win.
Date: 7/5/2018 4:45:00 AM
Hi WW, your word skills hold me in awe. You set such an excellent canvas before the mind, images of deepest emotion held within their moments. This is poetry of the highest order my friend. This is a wonder to read, tugging at the emotions. Another fave my friend. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/30/2018 2:31:00 PM
You leave me in awe... :)
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Date: 6/26/2018 9:40:00 PM
I feel the internal struggle inside the heart.. a very interesting view exposed in your poem!
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Date: 6/26/2018 11:39:00 AM
A heart deprived is a heart that will struggle to survive. You searched the depths of such a heart from within it's wounded chambers. I hope your imagination is sharp enough to have done this without having experienced it. Blackened? maybe?
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