Blackbirds

a flock of blackbirds take flight surprised a giggling toddler delights in her own power 12/20/2021

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Terry Flood

Date: 1/5/2022 3:17:00 PM

That is absolutely smashing, P.S. I can see the scene quite vividly. Terry

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/5/2022 3:56:00 PM

Oh, thank you! ~ps

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 12/30/2021 5:54:00 PM

A perfect tanka! PS A simple vivid picture conveying an essential human truth.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/30/2021 6:24:00 PM

Geoffrey thank you for your generous praise for this little poem. I hope you had a happy Christmas and I wish you many blessings for the New Year. :) ~ps

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/22/2021 3:58:00 PM

Hello P.S. Awtry, a giggling toddler finds laughter in the black birds flight. Merry Christmas. enjoy your evening.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/23/2021 6:17:00 AM

Hello P.S. Awtry, your welcome. Merry Christmas to you. Enjoy your day my friend.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/22/2021 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Darlene! Merry Christmas! :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/21/2021 2:42:00 PM

P.S this is so cute you have described this small tale so vividly that I coul take a photo of it, I certainly did in my mind . Awesome! A Happy Christmas my friend to you and all your family and may all your wishes come to fruition in the coming year. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/21/2021 3:35:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer! I am glad you liked this little poem. Merry Christmas to you and your family!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/21/2021 1:11:00 PM

Creative one. Some toddlers would be afraid some would be looking in wonder. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Our son-in-law has been diagnosed with gallstones. They are keeping him overnight in the hospital. Sara

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/21/2021 1:54:00 PM

Gallstones are no fun! Had my gallbladder taken out a few years back. I hope he is feeling better! Thank you for commenting on this little poem:). -ps