Blackberry Ink

Blackberry ink explodes in my mouth 
That bitter flavour I’ve grown to tolerate 
Keep eating, continue devouring 
Again and again…why do I do this to myself? 

Juice so dark, so rich, so deep  
Favoured in writing messages of adoration  
Never received, but the intent was present  
Never bitten, but the fruit was pleasant  

Linger on the taste of these berries of night  
Sour, unbearable, foul 
Such disgust could only have meanings of hatred  
Such eagerness to dine solely implies feelings of love   
The insects that feed on lies consumed them both 
As a child would a hot fudge sundae 

Eventually all I was left with were broken hopes of discovering a piece in the puzzle of identity 

A desire to keep eating, until like the blackberries, I too explode 

And that bitter flavour I’ve grown to tolerate  
The sour, unbearable, foul 
Blackberry ink 


Date written: 08/08/2022 

Contest title: Your Thoughts On Blackberries Poetry Contest 

Name of sponsor: Matt Caliri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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September 16, 2026 at 7:18 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
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