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Blackberries



blackberries growing beside the road
scratchy vines protecting their load
stop the car!
no need for a bucket made of tin
purple juice running down the chin
better by far!


Barbara Gorelick
Tail-Rhyme contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 8, 2011 at 4:39 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

August 7, 2011 at 11:08 AM

Quick congrats before I get logged out again!

Kash Poet

August 7, 2011 at 10:16 AM

Congrats Barbara on your win ...enjoyed your poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 6, 2011 at 1:09 AM

Congrats BG on your HM with this fascinating entry ..using new form so well ..enjoy honor luv..

Andrea Dietrich

August 5, 2011 at 7:08 PM

this is marvelous, Barbara! congrats. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 5, 2011 at 5:16 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, Barbara

Zzzzz Zzzzz

August 2, 2011 at 4:32 PM

Well-written piece, Barbara. Funny too! This must have a great chance in the contest! xoxo Robert.

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 2, 2011 at 1:37 PM

Thanks for the entry, Barbara

Thvia Shetley

August 2, 2011 at 10:35 AM

Blackberries are my favorite fruit.... now I'm having a craving! Lovely piece Barbara!

James Peranteau

August 2, 2011 at 9:39 AM

I have just recently come across this form dear poet, actually the second time, and the second time which I have tried to make sence of it...yet now, with this write of yours; I get it ! Awesome write Barbara! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james