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Black Widow Murderer

Unwittingly sucked in entangled within lifes cobwebs poisoned wrapped and saved for later Until satisfaction for hunger is needed preyed upon with slow satisfaction and pride despite the deceit and trickery of enticement Faced with soulful persecution of honesty reality and truth to be lost forever whilst deceitful one is admired Displayed devouring of specimen No trial nor retribution, let others fall fate alas before finished – destiny will strike Poor black widow will choke own untimely death from own grip of life suffocating truths stifled now smothering

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/7/2011 11:22:00 AM
This poem is right on. How much I wish it wasn't so. thannks Julie
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Date: 12/5/2010 5:01:00 PM
nobody is immune to the the concept of kharma and the application of sowing and reaping
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Date: 12/3/2010 4:03:00 AM
soup mail anna, thanks for you kund words
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Date: 12/3/2010 2:50:00 AM
Well ... simply , breathtaking, amazing visuals and complementary reduxes ... very well said and written ... i will be looking for more from you ..... Wishing you well in all that you do .... Ryland
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:06:00 AM
Good Morning Anna-Marie. I am stopping by to thank you for your kind comments. They mean the world to me. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Wishing you and yours the happiest of Holidays. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:06:00 PM
Yes, like Carolyn said here, this is very deep, Anna Marie. Lots of great alliteration in this poem as well! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:47:00 AM
Wow! This is deep, Anna-Marie. Those who "devour" others for their own satisfaction often end up choked by the consequences of their actions. Excellent poem, my friend. Very powerful! Love, Carolyn
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