Black Widow Murderer

Unwittingly sucked in
entangled within lifes cobwebs
poisoned wrapped and saved for later

Until satisfaction for hunger is needed
preyed upon with slow satisfaction and pride
despite the deceit and trickery of enticement

Faced with soulful persecution of honesty
reality and truth to be lost forever
whilst deceitful one is admired

Displayed devouring of specimen
No trial nor retribution, let others fall fate
alas before finished – destiny will strike

Poor black widow will choke
own untimely death from own grip of life
suffocating truths stifled now smothering

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/7/2011 11:22:00 AM
This poem is right on. How much I wish it wasn't so. thannks Julie
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Date: 12/5/2010 5:01:00 PM
nobody is immune to the the concept of kharma and the application of sowing and reaping
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Date: 12/3/2010 4:03:00 AM
soup mail anna, thanks for you kund words
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Date: 12/3/2010 2:50:00 AM
Well ... simply , breathtaking, amazing visuals and complementary reduxes ... very well said and written ... i will be looking for more from you ..... Wishing you well in all that you do .... Ryland
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:06:00 AM
Good Morning Anna-Marie. I am stopping by to thank you for your kind comments. They mean the world to me. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Wishing you and yours the happiest of Holidays. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:06:00 PM
Yes, like Carolyn said here, this is very deep, Anna Marie. Lots of great alliteration in this poem as well! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:47:00 AM
Wow! This is deep, Anna-Marie. Those who "devour" others for their own satisfaction often end up choked by the consequences of their actions. Excellent poem, my friend. Very powerful! Love, Carolyn
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