Black Void

BLACK VOID

Shallow actions
  Misguided trust
    Broken promises
      Meaningless hurt

Unrequited love
  Forgotten vows
    Screaming shadows
      Lonely souls

Despised feelings
  Unheard crowds
    Selfish stunts
      Numbed hearts

Black void
  Dragging souls
    Twisted destinies
      Senseless world

September 21st, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Such deep sad imagery Claudia. Sadly I guess many can relate to your words when a relationship has broken down:-(It's so lovely to see you back on soup:-) hugs jan xx
Polydoro Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Thanks my dear!!! My muse took a loooooong vacation from me... hehehe I hope to be back back for good... Hugs, Jan xoxoxo
One Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:08 AM
A dark and sad write..
Polydoro Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:23 AM
Yeah... guess we all have our dark and sad moments... Hugs :*
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