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Black Sludge

Deep in ocean near the coast, slicks black-oil-slime’s terminal ghost. Man’s ultimate deadly mistake, razes abundant life in its wake. Grim offing visions fiercely hold, dismal lust for this liquid gold. Thick black muck that stifles breath, drags live water’s eventual death. Black sludge a cloak of despair, choking its vein to complete repair. Time will tell of the spoils done, before mankind, reverts to none… Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Fifth Place Winner ~ "Gulf Oil Spill” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Team PoetrySoup July 4, 2010

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Date: 9/2/2010 5:13:00 PM
congrats on the feature, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:22:00 AM
A beautiful write and a perfect poem to be featured this week~~
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Date: 8/30/2010 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem being featured this week well done love Jayne
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Date: 8/30/2010 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:10:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a nice one to share with us all... with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations to you Caryl on your win in Team PoetrySoup's contest "Gulf Oil Spill". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:01:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in the Gulf Oil Spill contest with this brilliant write ..enjoy your special sweet victory this happy Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:58:00 PM
Sobering but excellent write on such a tragic mess. You illustrate it very well, good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/3/2010 8:20:00 AM
Good write... shame our wods can't solve this problem... enjoy your writing much
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Date: 6/3/2010 6:40:00 AM
nice write caryl, cheers oscar
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