Black Sludge

Deep in ocean near the coast, 
slicks black-oil-slime’s terminal ghost.  
Man’s ultimate deadly mistake,
razes abundant life in its wake.

Grim offing visions fiercely hold,
dismal lust for this liquid gold.
Thick black muck that stifles breath,
drags live water’s eventual death.

Black sludge a cloak of despair,
choking its vein to complete repair.
Time will tell of the spoils done,
before mankind, reverts to none…

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Gulf Oil Spill” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Team PoetrySoup
July 4, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 2, 2010 at 5:13 PM
congrats on the feature, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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August 31, 2010 at 6:22 AM
A beautiful write and a perfect poem to be featured this week~~
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August 30, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem being featured this week well done love Jayne
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August 30, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Caryl. Love, Carol
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August 29, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Congrats Caryl on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a nice one to share with us all... with luv..
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations to you Caryl on your win in Team PoetrySoup's contest "Gulf Oil Spill". Love, Carol
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August 15, 2010 at 3:01 PM
Congrats Caryl on your winning poem in the Gulf Oil Spill contest with this brilliant write ..enjoy your special sweet victory this happy Sunday..with luv..
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June 14, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Sobering but excellent write on such a tragic mess. You illustrate it very well, good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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June 3, 2010 at 8:20 AM
Good write... shame our wods can't solve this problem... enjoy your writing much
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June 3, 2010 at 6:40 AM
nice write caryl, cheers oscar
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