Black Shroud

I watch you sleeping,
shrouded by shadows
and I just want to curl up beside you,
 hold you forever...

If only I could,
I would take away all of your pain,
everything that has been causing it
and absorb it

How I wish it were that easy

I am not even that strong
but I still want to do that,
if I could...

Role reversal--
I suck at it.

You've protected me for so long,
guided me, taught me

and now,
when it seems that
it should be my turn
to do that for you,

I fail miserably.

I seem so powerless
to what we are against

Is it because I am not yet strong enough...
or because you are so strong?

God knows how life has dealt you with 
heavy, heavy blows
and yet you still stand.

Sometimes a bit frail,
yet your inner strength 
always carries you through

How I wish I can be like you.

That black veil is still there
as I watch you sleep

When will it be lifted?

I do not know.

I'm here, though
always will be






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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/19/2011 8:12:00 AM
i miss my mom, nikkks... a tender, searing artword that sends me reeling!.. yup, got caught with that 20-hour TPS error that i wasn;t able to enter PD's nature contest.. good you were saved; now TPS has a blog about re-programming??? ... love this piece that comes straight from the heart... thanks for the help... love and huggs, nette..:)
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Date: 7/17/2011 6:12:00 PM
don't get down on u luv .. u are a great human being and these emotional words reflect such tenderness as well as strength.. luv it Nikko...
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:04:00 PM
i before e except after c,i was taught? protien protein....i think you is right..looks better... Very touching support for your frail friend. lovely thoughts mate, Don
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:57:00 PM
A beautiful testiment of profound love and devotion. Great imagery. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:19:00 PM
Hey, you are back to your old self, NIKKO! Just stopping by to say hi and I hope your mom is ok. It's been a nice day for writing poems! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2011 4:35:00 PM
a wonderful sentiment nikko. I hope you've shared this poem with the person in your poem so they know how much you care.
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:37:00 PM
Hi, Nikko,.,,, how are you.. me tryinh hard... lol.. well the rain contest was on that list of contest you send me...lol.. so yes u have to love the rain,,, also,,, a very deep poem.. me i am done..lol.. very zzp.d. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.... but fighting it... wow i did lots on the soup in 4 hours.. i wrote a poem.. than i closed contest.. than i posted blog, than i posted new contest. Than i did both contest greetings .. yesterdays and today.. im gonna explode..lol.. bye for now,..p.d.
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Date: 7/14/2011 9:22:00 AM
Great emotive and expressive work..God gives us the strenght that we need when we need..We don't get it ahead of time..This person is lucky to have you on their side if this is a real life happening and not just a write on topic.Thanks so much for your continued support by commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 7/13/2011 9:41:00 PM
Nikko, this is so heartfelt. REally good poetry becuase it is so close to you. Do keep me posted on how she is doing. ARe you going to show her this? I bet she is so proud of you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/13/2011 1:17:00 PM
Yes! I've felt this way. You nailed it - how fragile and weak life can be. Love, daverc
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Niknuk!. Thank you for sharing and I will be back again soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:19:00 AM
sometimes sappy is what is required my friend.. *mwahugs* and thank you for your kind words as always..
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:50:00 AM
Missy even though it might not seem that way to you but just by being there every step of the way even when you feel like you are doing nothing to ease the pain maybe exactly what is required.. Sometimes we don't always have the answers but an embrace and a "I love you" does represent strength in its most precious form.. Beautiful heartfelt write from you.. *mwahugs* en lfde ;)
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Wilma Neels
Date: 7/13/2011 11:28:00 AM
I know she'll draw strength from that.. Night night Missy *mwahugs*
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 7/13/2011 11:24:00 AM
Thank you dearie... your comments mean a lot to me; I am hugging her even tighter tomorrow...mwahugs to you
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