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Black gold, velvet beauty rose bud Lost in thy dreams you carry Found dying in mourning flood Glancing upon your last stanza’s guard Silent mantra and strips of sward Love song breathe sadness, farewells wary Pain thunders unmanageably hard Shard ashes buried once tainted by lifeblood 10/27/2016 .-.- , , , . ‘_ ‘ ) ` - . . >` ‘ ( / . . . . `I . . I l. . . . .). . . l ( . . . . `) . . ) ‘ = (l / . =’ ` - .` . – , . `) l 11 _.-‘l 11(_,/ ..( l .’ ` 1(1(.. 11. / (`1/1..1/(, 11 11 _.-‘l 11(_,/ /
- Poetry Contest : One Specific Rhyme Scheme Sponsored by: Laura Loo Rhyme A - B - A - C - C - B - C - A

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Date: 10/30/2016 8:21:00 PM
Stunning and beautiful poem eve!
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Date: 10/28/2016 7:15:00 AM
Touching ... innovative ... creative ... GL ...
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Date: 10/28/2016 6:49:00 AM
Hello Eve, Best of Luck in the contest with "Black Rose"!! This is certainly a very compelling write. Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 10/28/2016 3:06:00 AM
Very beautiful words, Eve:) I love the artwork:)
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Date: 10/27/2016 10:52:00 PM
Very beautiful and creative - the art as well! Good luck in the contest ... CayCay
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