Black Rose

So I was once told the story of "THE BLACK ROSE".

As Intriguing  as It was,so persuasive and mysterious, one would assume they'd already know, precisely how the story goes...
BUT NO, NOT SO...
Get ready for the blissful twist 
Which resulted as merely  a simple Kiss
Big Daddy you put that real on my mind
Made me see the value to me as well as my time
You stepped in between my normal routine 
Presented to me Fool's Gold wasn't at all the actual Thing or Bing 
Not even so much the ideal Fling
MADE ME SEE... surely I was such more
Than a simple silly sideline whore
Naive, still I got lost in your words & though to myself  he wants the rose
But then too, I thought again.For what, what was his intention or purpose?
Now I've come to accept  you my friend  were my excape, my destraction,
You my friend said "You'd do" exactly as you said you would
If only I applied myself to be  all that I could 
You wanting me... made me want you 
Which opened my eyes too all actuality 
I was caught in Fool's Paradise but now I'm back to Reality 
The purity of existing and being all that I can be thanks to you my vision is 20/20
The Black Rose which is me...
Have  the ability to apply adjustments to me which brings about me being sencerely Happy 
No need for thorns to protect... 
From neglect or reject but to cautiously correct & know rather than to expect 
When the right one does come alone
I won't have to ask because True love will automatically be shown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/7/2016 1:31:00 AM
Insane jane, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
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