Black Rose

once to divin lovers
nothing to separate them not the world
when they set a converstation, their lips would curl
they would smil, when they were together nothing could put them down
not so much as a frown
the boy would clown around
the girl would enjoy
the two, madily in love, nothing could separate them, not the world
but hell turned its eyes on true love
saten stared with a grin, ideas to separate these two doves
one day the boy walking along found a rose the color, black
so he set back
ideas in his head
that he would not dread
once home he come upon his wife
on the floor a knife
she had cut her throat opening a package
that on the label said love forever
a marriage cake
what a fate
days later he couldnt take it
this had to be it
so with that same rose
in his hand 
and in the other, a note, one so cleaver
it said and i quote "Love Forever"
and with that knife, rose to his throat, same bloody knife
on that night, same place, beside the cake
lay the two makes
the moral of the story, love the one special some one, always
and never give up, no matter when death is over do this couple loved
through and through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 11/11/2009 9:40:00 AM
Wow this poem left me breathless it had me really interested and at the edge of my seat wanting more good writting and thanks for your comment
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