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Nette Onclaud

Pick a Pensee

02-07-2025

jungle warrior black skinning out bare belly rogues rends velvet tents of jagged night rumblings under grey mists

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Len Gasun

Date: 7/4/2025 8:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win and this stellar write my dear poet friend Trina! Thanks for sharing with us your wonderful talent in poetry. Hugs and cheers! Blessings to you always.

Jeanette Swan

Date: 7/4/2025 4:53:00 AM

Love the 'torn velvet tents of jagged night' setting a scene for your black panther, jungle warrior. Night certainly has a tangible texture when it is truly dark, and the tearing speaks of danger. J :)

Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:47:00 PM

Many thanks, Jeanette. Yes, that was the idea. I appreciate your feedback.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 7/4/2025 1:29:00 AM

Congrats. on your placement with this poem

Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Oliver.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2025 9:21:00 PM

Great imagery. Big congrats

Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:25:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. I appreciate your kind comments. Blessings!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/3/2025 1:25:00 PM

Terrific Trina! Congratulations! :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/4/2025 6:03:00 PM

I agree - interesting theme/prompt. Interesting movie, too. :)

Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Linda! It was an interesting prompt. I enjoyed the movie. Also, I was more familiar with this title than the others. I had watched The Shape of Water a long time ago, but I couldn't remember any of it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2025 12:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Great to see your name on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:22:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. I appreciate your feedback. Blessings!