Black Panther

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2nd in Pick a Pensee Contest (Sponsor: Nette Onclaud)

Judged: July 3rd, 2025

jungle
warrior black
skinning out bare belly rogues
rends velvet tents of jagged night
rumblings under grey mists

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Date: 7/4/2025 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and this stellar write my dear poet friend Trina! Thanks for sharing with us your wonderful talent in poetry. Hugs and cheers! Blessings to you always.
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Date: 7/4/2025 4:53:00 AM
Love the 'torn velvet tents of jagged night' setting a scene for your black panther, jungle warrior. Night certainly has a tangible texture when it is truly dark, and the tearing speaks of danger. J :)
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:47:00 PM
Many thanks, Jeanette. Yes, that was the idea. I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 7/4/2025 1:29:00 AM
Congrats. on your placement with this poem
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Oliver.
Date: 7/3/2025 9:21:00 PM
Great imagery. Big congrats
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. I appreciate your kind comments. Blessings!
Date: 7/3/2025 1:25:00 PM
Terrific Trina! Congratulations! :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/4/2025 6:03:00 PM
I agree - interesting theme/prompt. Interesting movie, too. :)
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! It was an interesting prompt. I enjoyed the movie. Also, I was more familiar with this title than the others. I had watched The Shape of Water a long time ago, but I couldn't remember any of it.
Date: 7/3/2025 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Great to see your name on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
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Trina Layne
Date: 7/4/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I appreciate your feedback. Blessings!
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