Black Note

Thought that I would be alone
Up in the skyline
Thought that I would be lost 
Drown by the sea

Together we're holding hands
Gripping one another within the tidal waves
Our time has stopped
Fate has spoken

Laughters, curiosities, plans and goals
Reunions, hopes and loves
Blur within the haze
Abandoned in tragedy

Landed to the new dimension
Ushered by the prayers
Don't cry, love... Just don't...
We are walking to the land of Lord

Keep strong my love... With faith...
We still can see the same moon that we used to see
As if we stand on the same base
Though we are seperate in a distinct room

Deep condolence for the victims of plane crash Air Asia qz 8501 may they rest in peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Clemons Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 8:05 PM
Brilliant tribute to those lives no longer present, Yanny. It is true, although they are no longer physically here, their spirit is indeed still alive, and memorable for those loved ones. Great poem overall, enjoyable indeed. Check out some of my poems. Might find some you like. Peace.
Widjanarko Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 2:21 AM
Thank you Jiril for your kindly comment. This has been a dramatic tragedy in my country at that time. The mourn's atmosphere sorely felt by the entire people in my city. The plane departed from my city and supposed to be landed in Singapore. There were 16 children in that plane include infants, and some still has not yet been found by the rescue team. Now I heard that the mission has closed. They discontinue the search for the rest of the victims who still missing.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:56 AM
This is sad but still with a hopeful feel. My prayers go out to the families. Drop by and visit, I miss your comments.
Widjanarko Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 2:28 AM
I forget to reply on this one :) thank you Rick for the visit. I am still trying my best to keep supporting you through your work as possible as I could, don't worry Rick, you still one of my favorite poet :) hug, yanny
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