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Dickens said that the law is an ass. Perhaps it was in his day. Today it is more of a chameleon in ass skin. Welcome to the age of tailor-made justice.

Black Lives

When a man stepped out his childhood home,
planting a brave foot in the open world, not an age, 
not a generation, not a world ago,
There breathed and burned in him hope shared with 
mama's receding figure frozen in prayer by the 
doorpost to his back 
That his way he would make through this mild wild
that law and claw both make the world with flesh 
unmarred by scratch or patch.

"You'll keep out of trouble if you behave yourself," 
she would advise.
That, sure, was the wisdom of her world, her old 
world now long gone, 
When the law was still a genuine ass, not a 
chameleon in ass skin, 
That turns deathly black when around blacks and 
pristine white when around whites.

Black or white, all will rue the loss of that world
when a man was safe if he behaved himself.
Nowadays, he'll keep out of trouble
Only if he behaves himself,
The police behave themselves,
And court behaves itself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Milgate Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:17 PM
good to see so many here acknowledging a struggle that is just nuts, and seems worse right now due to some who are fearful. perhaps this is a sign that things are changing, and will change for the better - for a just saner world. thank you for your poem. Life is hard we need each other.
Apell Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 5:28 AM
Linda, we sure need each other to build that saner world. And for many years now daring hands have been reaching across the divide. Results are already there to see: things continue to improve compared to the world of yesterday. Thanks for taking time to share your thoughts.
Coulstock Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:34 AM
A a very impressive piece Agona and a sad reflection on our world.I too though have faith in humanity,that one day we will all realise that no matter our colour,our origins or our creed we are all one.-simply one race of human beings-Then we will love each other,treat each other with respect and live in peace. God bless you. June
Apell Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 5:15 AM
Sylvia, I long for that day... Already we are headed there: things, though still bad, have improved considerably. Thanks for passing by.
Coreggia Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Another great thought provoking poem. The wheel of justice it seems turns faster for some than others, and not always in the same direction. It has me at a loss. Amitiés
Apell Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 11:12 AM
Your metaphor describes the situation aptly. Turn it may "slowly and in a different direction", but like MLK said, the long arc of progress bends towards justice. And bend it will in due course. Thanks for dropping in--and for the warm words!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 12:43 PM
So true Agona. I have such strong opinions about how the police treat different races. Maybe every officer who was given a Taser should be tased so they wouldn't so freely tase others. Laws need to be changed. Jails teach prisoners how to become better criminals, it is all such a farce and we tax payers are paying for all of it. Equality has a long row to hoe. Outstanding work Agona! : ) 7
Apell Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Much appreciate your compliments, Connie! I think formerly they took advantage of the authority of their uniforms knowing that nobody would doubt their word. Cellphones have crossed this blank cheque: now they must contend with videos. The problem has now shifted to the courts which are unwilling to convict even in the face of clear video evidence.
Vaso Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Very powerful and well said. I really hope things will change for the better!
Apell Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 4:48 AM
I believe in the innate goodness of man, so I know that things will ultimately improve. Thanks for your kind comment.
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