Black Hole Shadowed

Inclined Steep Mountain, 
Down A Spiral, No Rope, 
To Pull Me Out,
Given One, Last, Struggle,
To Conquest It, This Un-Beatable,
Sourced, Black Hole,
Shadowed, Called Your Heart,
You Show N' Tell, All Necessary
Actions, Hanging On To, 
A Love, That No Longer, Exist,
For You.....IT DIED!!!!!

Carma Reed
10-31-12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 3:36 PM
this is a wonderful and very profound poem, Carma..
Sanderson Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 10:30 AM
Thank you very much Harry
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