Black Hole

Black hole



Even attempting to write about black hole
A vacant remained in the mind before write
How would be that gorgeous black 
Than other matter immatter of my globe 

Heard, it is so deep and dense 
Does not let even pass to light
What will happen If I write a letter!!
Him,addressing black hole the great

Will he send an messenger to me
addressing (? ) or accepting what
Then how could I be reach there
And how to hope, hand shake with him!!!

How will I be drawn into his sphere?
Difficult to imagine to stand before
How would I see him with this natural eyes
Or he will provide me immaterial eyes!

Decision I wove in mind forget to go there
This earth with lives of millions is better far
At least day night equals according to season
As stress and distress are its lovely ornaments

My globe the earth a grand gracious:---

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/1/2016 1:53:00 PM
John, thank you very much for reading my poem black hole. To write about the universe is very hard not to crack still love and attraction towards her sometimes scribbles appears . Again thank you very much for kind words.
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Date: 5/31/2016 1:51:00 PM
A difficult subject when trying to write about the mysteries of a Black Hole. You made a good attempt of it, Deepak. Pleased to make your acquaintance! My best regards. :) john P.s A seven for a good effort!
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Date: 5/24/2016 2:49:00 PM
Yes, Sandra, Sometimes I love to think about the universe and when I go through it, puts me in so puzzling that I cannot explain my wonder and desires to surrender Almighty the God. He is all in all resource of all I believe. Thank you very much for friendship.
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Date: 5/24/2016 9:21:00 AM
Hello, Deepak, your poem's title drew me in to read your write. I too am fascinated with all aspects of our universe and especially black holes. It is difficult to imagine for sure. I enjoyed your poem very much. Sandra
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