Black Hole

I couldn't breathe,
All I could feel was pain,
All I could see was the pitch black sorrow that surrounded me,

I close my eyes,
I begin to fall,
The strong agony I feel as the pain,
Tears me apart slowly,

I keep hitting the ground,
But every time I open my eyes I'm still falling,

My surroundings worsen,
My insides are now dead,
But I remain alive....
Falling in this endless hole,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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