Black Hole

You're a black hole
something so tragic
everything you do is destroyed
as if by magic
I touch you and you pull back so plainly
I can see you can't bother to be near me
I wanted to ask you
how are you today
I simply despise the fact that you're ...so gay
I thought I made it clear
you can't become more by sitting here
You have to act and act on your emotion
everything is going 
up and down like the ocean
everywhere you are you bring pain and destruction
so much eruption from the ground and action
I think of you now
how are you living
are you still good 
are you now giving?
are you alive with your heart somehow
but I bet it is hollow
something so shallow
where you think me so empty
I know the truth swallows
You are so tragic
so destructive and magic
You simply can't hold onto a soul
you are a contemptible fool
so demanding and angry
I think of you plainly
leave everyone alone
I want you to not suffer
to cause grief to others
to chain your demise into their lives
I think of you now and then
I surmise
I realize that you've probably never been
with a true good man
that you've hurt and you're hurt
and you simply can't stand it
but the pain won't go away
not now, not ever
you hide your sorrows
you're lonely and clever
I think of you now and then...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/29/2013 8:10:00 PM
Very nice poem.
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