Black Hole

Event horizon
Incredible gravity
Light can not escape
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 7:02 PM
lets trip through to the other side! if all our 'soup family' jumps at the same time!.... perfection! James! james
Fraser Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 2:53 PM
Excellent write James, but there's more to black holes than we imagine, sadly i won't be around to say told you so to the scientists>>James
Arteaga Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 12:09 AM
sorry the first line scared reminded of me of that scary movie, but space itself is so scary i think, this is a great description in such few words
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 3:37 PM
Good! I like it... a LOT! I think a lot about black holes. Besides poetry, and dabble in the visual arts. I think you'll like this image. "Recycling Light" Lovingly, Dane Link >> http://daneann.redbubble.com/sets/74184/works/3331791-2-recycling-light
Mckenzie Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 5:47 PM
Interesting view you created! Well done! Laura :)
Nutter Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Well done very descriptive.
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 1:42 PM
Nicely written, Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Freeman Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 12:37 PM
Unique observation, witty, James, Possibly the absolute zero of intention, Sincerely Moses
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