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Black Hole

Why did you invoke pain in my heart? You have created a black hole in my heart, Countless galaxies and stars I have swallowed, No emotions or feelings are left behind in my heart. Wish you had given a few rays of hope in my heart, I would have become a supernova in the explosive creation mode of universe, Many galaxies, stars, and planets would have born in my heart, All bonded together in love in the dark world of starry skies. I am heart broke, I watch moon revolving around the earth, In my thoughts and dreams, I revolve around with gravitational attraction around my love. In dark or moonlit nights, Enchanted with the glimmer of twinkling stars, Heart flies and sits amongst the stars, Hoping my lover would take a glimpse with her beautiful eyes.

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Date: 10/12/2023 12:41:00 PM
I wonder if this is your first one>
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Jay Narain
Date: 10/13/2023 8:57:00 AM
Not really, The first one on this site.
Date: 5/18/2023 10:23:00 AM
Sadly Jay unrequited love really does hurt, the reader feels the pain in this moving Free Verse. Welcome to PoetrySoup… Belle
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Date: 5/13/2023 9:30:00 PM
This is so sad, yet so beautiful Jay, as Wendy commented below, heart touching and very well written. Thank you for visiting my poem and commenting. By the way, welcome to Poetrysoup, it is good to have you here.
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Date: 4/23/2023 5:21:00 PM
A sad poem Jay, filled with emotion. Some days we just feel like pouring it all out, and you did. It touched my heart. Very well written, Cheers Jay.
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