Black Hole

I am the stillness 
beyond a spiral vortex —
the eye of the storm

freedomi amspacehaiku

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 11, 2019 at 6:54 PM

...& mo congrats on topping the new poems list! Have a super day! :)

Paul Marc

March 12, 2019 at 12:11 PM

Thanks Maureen!!!

Oliver Mckeithan

March 9, 2019 at 10:59 PM

Hello, Congrats on the haiku. Very nicely done.

Paul Marc

March 12, 2019 at 12:12 PM

Much appreciated :)

James Edward Lee Sr.

February 27, 2019 at 12:40 PM

The black hole.... Brilliant write P.M.

Paul Marc

February 27, 2019 at 1:37 PM

Thanks James ~ I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Especially with such kind words.

Greg Gaul

February 17, 2019 at 6:02 AM

Three powerful images in three terse and poetic lines. Well penned but more importantly, well thought through. Congratulations on passing the horizon threshold of the haiku.

Paul Marc

February 17, 2019 at 8:21 AM

I appreciate your kind feedback. Thanks Greg and have a wonderful weekend :)