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Black Hole

I am the stillness 
beyond a spiral vortex
the eye of the storm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/17/2019 6:02:00 AM
Three powerful images in three terse and poetic lines. Well penned but more importantly, well thought through. Congratulations on passing the horizon threshold of the haiku.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/17/2019 8:21:00 AM
I appreciate your kind feedback. Thank you Greg and have a wonderful weekend :)
Date: 2/16/2019 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! Such haunting images!
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/16/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Chantelle!!!
Date: 2/16/2019 3:46:00 PM
Back with congratulations! :) xomo
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/16/2019 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Maureen :)
Date: 2/14/2019 6:36:00 PM
wow super haiku PM, i especially love that final line:-) hugs Jan xx
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/14/2019 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Jan - Happy Valentines Day :)
Date: 2/11/2019 6:25:00 PM
There are no words that could do this one justice. I am in awe.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/11/2019 8:17:00 PM
You are too kind - thank you.
Date: 2/11/2019 2:05:00 PM
I was going to say 'deep' but that's not the word, this is expansive. Lovely done. xomo
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/11/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thanks again Maureen ;)