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Black Hole

I am the stillness beyond a spiral vortex the eye of the storm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/11/2019 6:54:00 PM
...& mo congrats on topping the new poems list! Have a super day! :)
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P.M. Richter
Date: 3/12/2019 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Maureen!!!
Date: 3/9/2019 10:59:00 PM
Hello, Congrats on the haiku. Very nicely done.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 3/12/2019 12:12:00 PM
I appreciate it - thanks :)
Date: 3/3/2019 11:56:00 AM
Hello P.M. Richter, the black hole means so many things.Being depressed for one. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/3/2019 6:06:00 PM
Thank you for explaining your poem. I now understand it more clearly. have a nice evening my friend.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 3/3/2019 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. I am pointing to the pure stillness within.
Date: 2/27/2019 12:40:00 PM
The black hole.... Brilliant write P.M.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/27/2019 1:37:00 PM
Thanks James ~ I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Especially with such kind words.
Date: 2/23/2019 2:55:00 PM
Really intense 3 lines ,that flow so smoothly. I like this, a fav for me. Congrats.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/23/2019 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Sandra! Have a wonderful weekend :)
Date: 2/17/2019 6:02:00 AM
Three powerful images in three terse and poetic lines. Well penned but more importantly, well thought through. Congratulations on passing the horizon threshold of the haiku.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/17/2019 8:21:00 AM
I appreciate your kind feedback. Thanks Greg and have a wonderful weekend :)
Date: 2/16/2019 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! Such haunting images!
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/16/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thank you Chantelle!!!
Date: 2/16/2019 3:46:00 PM
Back with congratulations! :) xomo
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/16/2019 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Maureen :)
Date: 2/14/2019 6:36:00 PM
wow super haiku PM, i especially love that final line:-) hugs Jan xx
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/14/2019 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Jan - Happy Valentines Day :)
Date: 2/11/2019 6:25:00 PM
There are no words that could do this one justice. I am in awe.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/11/2019 8:17:00 PM
You are too kind - thank you.
Date: 2/11/2019 2:05:00 PM
I was going to say 'deep' but that's not the word, this is expansive. Lovely done. xomo
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P.M. Richter
Date: 2/11/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thanks again Maureen ;)