Black Helicopters Overhead

i hope you don't mind 
if I wander in through your front door
and reset your clocks to headlight savings
life requires humor he said to the lens grinders
as he rode his all terrain moon beam to heaven
where they were eradicating stupidity with fairy tales
same **** greater magnification was basically it
slipped on their own icy hearts
applying one clever artifice after another
but after all one wants to hasten 
the modern world along clippity clop
impediments to traffic flow were to be shot
what happened next is not in the dictionary
which is fine don't get me wrong
beats the nuts off hunger
but the world is not nice anymore
isolated pockets of rebellion perhaps
out in the bleak lizard sands hanging from a tree
but the rest stuffed with foam peanuts
that could turn you to ballroom dancing
your narrator being the test case 
for daisy picking the numbers the samples the statistics
I love you just the same she whispered after the operation
the entire ABC unit was called in from the chalk mines
and the XYZ crew was called in from the slate quarry
but no amount of preparation could have warned them 
of the melancholic yet piquant sagging of standards 
his mind had turned upon itself out of shame and envy 
he had an entire city in his head 
that wasn’t in Architectural Digest
honkings sirens gunfire breaking glass
spasms and outbursts and phobias and anxieties and
compulgings and obsessities and hallucinotions and
mysterias and distortoons and damplifications and
twitchings and itchings and may I add bowel flux 
we haven't even begun to look at his libido
which had shrunk from a blacksmith's forge of intensity
to the vague expectation of an afternoon nap
better than living the prelude to a beheading
you decide if hiding in the bushes permanently
like a grinning jack in the box with a message
is the same as dancing through the forest
dressed in leaves and  emeralds 
pantomime after all is deception
random at first then shapes intervene
there is no random he said over and over in proof
they say the devil spoke Hebrew 
and Popeye smoked his spinach
a contemporary exercise in 
signal location


From "Engine of Didactic Beauty" available on Amazon
Artist Portfolio: http://walteralter.byethost32.com/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/9/2016 11:08:00 PM
Wow, Walter ... I'm a little speechless at the moment. There is a lot going on in this poem, and I'm having to slow down to keep up with it! It felt like a Stream of Consciousness poem to me ... your imagination is something else. I think my brain would explode trying to write something like this. Just excellent.
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Walter Alter
Date: 3/10/2016 10:26:00 AM
Many thanks, Tim. Reactions such as yours validates the effort and kinda makes my life worth living, lol! If you've ever tried to read James Joyce's "Finnegan's Wake", you'll know where I'm coming from. Joyce figured a way to make text contain the simultenaity of vision by combining many meanings in a single neologism or phrase. Language is more malleable than we think.
Date: 3/7/2016 6:29:00 PM
Dear Walter Excellent piece, my poetic friend enjoyed the read tonight, cheri
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Walter Alter
Date: 3/7/2016 11:20:00 PM
More on the way. Just published a 70 page poem, "Theater of Utter Charm" is one long bit of free verse.
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