Black Gold

Crude oil drilling
Dark viscous liquid

Becomes valuable
When first distilled

Automobiles
Cause pollution
More dollars for firms.




CONTEST:"Shanzi" sponsored by Joann Grisetti
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 5:33 AM
I like this one, down to earth and very true. You are a smart guy. You got exactly the message of my poem, about a great unease!
Horne Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 10:26 AM
lovely entry for this contest. Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:02 AM
gritty piece with a societal voice, olu.. may we respect the environment... a winning bet!..:) huggs!
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