Black Friday Blues

Black Friday Blues 

We set are clock to help avoid the biggest dash
 Look to the advertisement the paper is as dark as ash
 All for the new nintendo out the door a given chance to explore
 Inside were running on empty from toxic fumes
 Just not enough time to even clean our rooms
 Gone to soon from the imagination in our minds
 A cost of getting those items from standing in line
 We all been through this many times before
 Shackled to the exit sign by the edge of the door
 Still a willing chance at which to explore
 We push the proceed to call are neighbor a whore
 The scream for eleborate things for so much more
 There is the deviding line in are black friday blues
 With tempers on fire a scene from Hill Street Blues 
 All in the name of fun we run to avoid such lines
 This doesn't fit in with any jargon in a quest of time
 We often will fade into the scene in such an evil scheme
 The hand writing is on the wall choose to live with head ten feet tall
 Downtown long lines at the mall people trampled to death what a quest
 We cry, ***** & even moan for the sale items to lose their crest
 Rush hear & there just to get ahead of what ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 11/23/2016 8:24:00 PM
To get ahead before the prices go back up; anything to save a couple of bucks!:)
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