Notes About The Poem

Black Friday

Off to the races, running...
from pillar to post,
from store A to Z.

a mad dash for...
sweet deals; the bright light
of sheer excitement...

grace the faces
of early shoppers.
'Tis that time again...

for bargain-hunting.
So good luck, if it's your thing.
Don't be left with slim pickings!



Date written: 11/29/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Super cool ending this Dasher poem be, Edward! This whimsical fun-larity is a poetic sleigh ride. A sheer thrilla joy to read. Top-shelf poetry indeed. Love and more love always.
Ibeh Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, Freddie:-) Happy holidays!
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