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Acrylic by Eve Roper

Nestled upon the comfort of its owner's lap, Wakes up from a nap with teeth bearing yawn, Stretching its arms, extending its claws. Looking up with bright emerald eyes, Jumps down for a stroll in the dark. Out of the darkness it moves unseen, Midnight black, except for its luminous eyes, And its feline silhouette against the full moon. It raises its nose and looks up to the lit night sky, Switching its tail left to right, on silent paws. It stealth across the fence not shy, Prowling into the thickening night. 3/28/2022 Black Cat Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 4/4/2022 5:31:00 AM
"bright emerald eyes", "Midnight black" - Beautiful description. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/4/2022 1:37:00 AM
This is a lovely poem Eve, well done.
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Date: 3/29/2022 4:42:00 PM
This is lovely, Eve, and such a beautiful picture, you have captured the mood so well . . . : )
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Date: 3/29/2022 2:06:00 AM
I could see your black cat; nice imagery. Thank you for your kind comments.
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Date: 3/28/2022 5:08:00 PM
Great descriptive poem Eve. Well written :)
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Date: 3/28/2022 11:56:00 AM
It seems every cat believes it is a tiger until it is surprised . . . enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 3/28/2022 10:22:00 AM
This is a winning poem in any cat contest - it is slow and methodical like a cat.
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Date: 3/28/2022 9:32:00 AM
Beautifully done, Eve. your descriptiveness is really beyond excellent. Hoping you win first place, Eve! Pangie.xo
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Date: 3/28/2022 8:25:00 AM
Wow, Eve, how well you describe the cats I have had. I see you doing very well in Robert's contest. Loved the illustration, too.
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Date: 3/28/2022 2:08:00 AM
You create a vivid picture about the cat.. written so well..
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Date: 3/28/2022 12:49:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Great description. Best for a win. Hugs.
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