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Black Eyes

These black eyes Are far too wise As I slip through And meet your gaze The night sky Is spotless with No room for flaws My sight woven With bands of black silk Black seems thick Heavy and slick Black seems tangible Swallowed by the night Wavering between the excitement Begotten by the thrill And a desperate need to escape Till I see my silhouette Reflecting in the water Looking into a mirror Cast by the moon! 27.8.2021

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Date: 8/28/2021 9:55:00 PM
I like the feeling of mystery ad fascination in this poem:)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/29/2021 5:53:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer....Glad you liked the poem :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/29/2021 5:52:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer....Glad you liked the poem :)
Date: 8/28/2021 1:25:00 AM
Ah! love that twist in the end, Carol, awesome poem:)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/28/2021 2:25:00 AM
Thanks dear Jo...:)

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