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A METAPHOR AWAKENING 

Below deep snow snug and cozy, Waiting for winters final bow, Miss black eyed susan, Pokes thru nosey, Her face to love kowtows, I Rescue her from the nights chill, Her beauty will not be still, In my vase, On display, She sheds a single tear, A cry of thanks and not of fear, "I love you Susan", She knows this girl is sincere. ~Vickie Thayer~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/15/2018 2:38:00 PM
Vicki, Thank you for caring for the assurance of Spring! I always remember to bring potted plants in.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 11/20/2018 6:40:00 AM
(: Thanks, Me Too
Date: 9/21/2018 1:59:00 PM
I'm slightly uneducated when it comes to horticulture but...tah...is Susan plant life?
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 9/25/2018 6:34:00 AM
Yes, A Perennial Flower...Photo Above. But, This Is A Metaphor.
Date: 12/22/2017 8:49:00 PM
Simply beautiful Vickie :)
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 12/25/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thank You Very Much Chris!!
Date: 12/7/2017 12:29:00 PM
Vickie, your pen wrote sincerely and golden! I love it! Thank you for posting :-)
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 12/14/2017 1:52:00 PM
Thanks, Donna.
Date: 12/7/2017 6:32:00 AM
I understood your metaphor... Simply beautiful...
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 12/14/2017 1:52:00 PM
Thank You Much.
Date: 12/6/2017 4:08:00 PM
Lovely Vickie...
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 12/6/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank You Arturo!
Date: 12/6/2017 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful Vickie! :) xomo!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/7/2017 12:01:00 PM
Chimney Swifts detail from my painting :) thank you!
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 12/6/2017 5:40:00 PM
Oh No....Just Blew The Pic Up...Are They Swallows Or Hawks?...Beautiful Painting Whoever Did It.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 12/6/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thank You Maureen, Love Your Avatar..Are Those Eagles?

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