Vickie Hurtt - Thayer Poet Rhyme

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A METAPHOR AWAKENING 

Black Eyed Susan Loves April

Below deep snow snug and cozy,

Waiting for winters final bow,

Miss black eyed susan,

Pokes thru nosey,

Her face to love kowtows, 

I Rescue her from the nights chill,

Her beauty will not be still,

In my vase,

On display, 

She sheds a single tear, 

A cry of thanks and not of fear,

"I love you Susan",

She knows this girl is sincere.

~Vickie Thayer~

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David Drowley November 15, 2018 at 2:38 PM Vicki, Thank you for caring for the assurance of Spring! I always remember to bring potted plants in. Vickie Hurtt - Thayer November 20, 2018 at 6:40 AM (: Thanks, Me Too

J Hamilton Gist September 21, 2018 at 1:59 PM I'm slightly uneducated when it comes to horticulture but...tah...is Susan plant life? Vickie Hurtt - Thayer September 25, 2018 at 6:34 AM Yes, A Perennial Flower...Photo Above. But, This Is A Metaphor.

Chris Hagy December 22, 2017 at 8:49 PM Simply beautiful Vickie :) Vickie Hurtt - Thayer December 25, 2017 at 3:44 PM Thank You Very Much Chris!!

Donna Loughman December 7, 2017 at 12:29 PM Vickie, your pen wrote sincerely and golden! I love it! Thank you for posting :-) Vickie Hurtt - Thayer December 14, 2017 at 1:52 PM Thanks, Donna.

Silent One December 7, 2017 at 6:32 AM I understood your metaphor... Simply beautiful... Vickie Hurtt - Thayer December 14, 2017 at 1:52 PM Thank You Much.

Arturo Michael December 6, 2017 at 4:08 PM Lovely Vickie... Vickie Hurtt - Thayer December 6, 2017 at 5:37 PM Thank You Arturo!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 6, 2017 at 1:09 PM Wonderful Vickie! :) xomo! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 7, 2017 at 12:01 PM Chimney Swifts detail from my painting :) thank you! Vickie Hurtt - Thayer December 6, 2017 at 5:40 PM Oh No....Just Blew The Pic Up...Are They Swallows Or Hawks?...Beautiful Painting Whoever Did It. Vickie Hurtt - Thayer December 6, 2017 at 5:38 PM Thank You Maureen, Love Your Avatar..Are Those Eagles?