Black Drapes and Plastic Fingers

Awhile back my soul took a wrong turn
sometimes I wonder was I a tough birth
did I come out feet first
like a blue faced luge runner
banking right then left onto the icy cuff
launching into a starless pit of nothingness-
Maybe your breasts were filled with booze
not enough nurture.
Maybe a bit to much old fashioned strap 
from steppingstone mother
for the most minor infractions.
Without love to temper stings
life is just one big muddy slog
void of any spring-

I'm hesitant-simple decisions are difficult.
and that ever present haze of mistrust
once sparkling relations turning diamonds into dust-
Maybe I snapped when that pissed off farmer.
wrapped a dead snake around my neck-
For freeing his herd of cows-now I'm a bit of a control freak.
Wanting to palm butterflies and honeybees.
Maybe It was that fifth grade "teacher"(you know who you are). 
With the strong cologne and loose hands-
That made me into a quicksand man.
Everybody I meet gets sucked into the ooze. 

I need to let it all go-clean the mental lint trap.
but these sun crushers, present and past.
 keep arriving in sleek sharky waves.
Bearing loose plastic fingers and black satin drapes-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/19/2019 6:03:00 AM
This is a powerful write, and I found myself cringing about the dead snake being wrapped around a young boy's neck. Then you threw in the lecherous teacher. Wow. Powerful with such a ring of unhappy truth! Your poem speaks for so many. Great job!
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