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Black Cloud Feature

Lost black clouds skitter across the sky ice backs reach to connect black clouds as the blow across my window heavy rain for days now lost black clouds blow black against my eyes I close them lost in summary lost in allegory just lost

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 1/1/2015 10:19:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem.very interesting and meaningful.Thanks for sharing.Wish you dear poet a happy new year 2015.God bless you and all. -Safa

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2014 4:29:00 PM

ELLEN,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/11/2014 5:25:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ellen - I choose your first touching and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)