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Black Cloud

My black clouded sky won't clear from mistakes of years past this thunder storm pained loneliness of self tragedy thickens and will you come back this question left unanswered so maybe you weren't meant to clear my skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/10/2011 7:14:00 PM
can completely relate.... enjoyed.. take care
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Date: 10/5/2011 7:48:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Richard. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 10:22:00 AM
Good morning Richard, i have not felt this gloomy in a while now,,, i do have many mistakes i can not correct... how i wish i did! I know how it is to leave things unanswered,,, but, life does have to go on,,, Your skies will clear before long.. enjoyed your poem. have yourself a wonderful and beautiful day~ I sure will enjoy my day.. I HOPE~..;-) ~LINDA
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