Black Cloud

My black clouded sky
won't clear from mistakes
of years past this thunder
storm pained loneliness
of self tragedy thickens 
and will you come back 
this question left unanswered 
so maybe you weren't meant
to clear my skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 10, 2011 at 7:14 PM
can completely relate.... enjoyed.. take care
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October 5, 2011 at 7:48 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Richard. Love, Carol
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October 3, 2011 at 10:22 AM
Good morning Richard, i have not felt this gloomy in a while now,,, i do have many mistakes i can not correct... how i wish i did! I know how it is to leave things unanswered,,, but, life does have to go on,,, Your skies will clear before long.. enjoyed your poem. have yourself a wonderful and beautiful day~ I sure will enjoy my day.. I HOPE~..;-) ~LINDA
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