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Black Cloud!?*#@+& The Black Cloud lurched and swayed a bit, and somehow followed on. No sir I never needed it, and I bid it sir 'Begone'. And all I touched it turned to clay, yes everything went wrong. Though I persisted all the day, the black cloud was too strong. by D H Johnson vk4pr.
Brian Strand Contest Name FALL YOUR CHOICE any theme/any form max 12 lines

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Date: 9/25/2011 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fall Your Choice" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2011 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations Don. Hope that black cloud leaves soon. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:07:00 PM
Aloha Don, I can certainly relate with this poem.....hope your win has the sun shining through that cloud. Congrats on your deserving win!
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:38:00 PM
Sometimes it rains hard, you are Hawawi it:) shake off the cloud that sits hehehe
Date: 9/23/2011 10:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Don! Kim
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Date: 9/23/2011 7:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mate. Excellent write. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Don. Well done
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