Black Cloud

Black Cloud!?*#@+& The Black Cloud lurched and swayed a bit, and somehow followed on. No sir I never needed it, and I bid it sir 'Begone'. And all I touched it turned to clay, yes everything went wrong. Though I persisted all the day, the black cloud was too strong. by D H Johnson vk4pr.
Brian Strand Contest Name FALL YOUR CHOICE any theme/any form max 12 lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fall Your Choice" contest Don. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 12:26 AM
Congratulations Don. Hope that black cloud leaves soon. Love, Joyce
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 10:07 PM
Aloha Don, I can certainly relate with this poem.....hope your win has the sun shining through that cloud. Congrats on your deserving win!
Johnson Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 10:38 PM
Sometimes it rains hard, you are Hawawi it:) shake off the cloud that sits hehehe
Merryman Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Congrats on your win, Don! Kim
Taylor Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 7:30 PM
Congrats on your win, Mate. Excellent write. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
Quigley Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Don. Well done
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