Black By Design

Black by Design
Life sparkles in sultry, smoky eyes. Velvet smooth, black skin patterned from heart and soul of Africa’s fertile womb… cherished creation fashioned by breath of God!
07-08-2015 Contest: Waltzing with Color Sponsor: Kim Merryman Placement: 2nd
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Lee Sr. Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 8:27 PM
Just soul searching and reading some of your verses Beautiful, wonderful and short & sweet. Remember never lay your pen down ha ha ha!! James :D Excellent my friend
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August 27, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Hi James, this piece is very special to me and I am glad that you enjoyed reading it! Thank you for your continued support and encouragement, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Turner Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:50 PM
My dear Pandita. This is such a lovely verse. As I'm sure you are well too aware, your personal beauty has nothing to do with the color of your skin. Your beauty is on display every time you put pen to paper. Your heart is one of the most most beautiful I've ever encountered. Hadn't heard from your pen in a while and thought I'd drop in. Hope all is well. Missing your heart smile. Peace and God Bless.
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February 19, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Dear Daniel, thank you so very much for your heartfelt, beautiful, inspirational words which mean so much to me and brought sunshine into an otherwise dreary day! Thank you for the warmth and for checking on me! I have been distracted by work and other issues but I'm ok and hope to get back into the swing of things very soon! Wishing you a wonderful weekend and much blessings. Pandita
Fleming Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Forgot the seven again...Done it! :)
Sietesantos Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Many thanks,my friend! Pandita
Fleming Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 10:56 AM
I find your little poem both reassuring and enchanting. It is like some sort of sedative; It has a strange calming effect - Most peculiar! A lovely poem...A seven. My very warmest regards, Pandita! :) john
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November 7, 2015 at 11:20 AM
Hi John, you made my day with your wonderful praises and high score for this piece! Thank you so much and have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita
Leach Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 5:22 PM
Very poetic and beautiful.
Sietesantos Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 9:05 PM
Dear Alesia, I am so glad you stopped by and selected this piece to read. I very much appreciate your encouragement, support, and lovely compliments! Always the best to you! Pandita
Nau Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 1:18 AM
WONDERFUL! ...loved that he/she is a "cherished creation"! Great imagery with so few words! Very nice indeed!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Dear Edlynn, I am so glad you stopped by and selected this piece to read. I very much appreciate your encouragement, support, and lovely compliments! Always the best to you! Pandita
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 7:45 PM
nice write, i will read more of your poems
Sietesantos Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 10:14 PM
Hi Louis, thank you so very much for visiting and for your wonderful support for my work! I greatly appreciate your compliments. Please stop by more often. Warmest regards. Pandita
Boddie Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 12:53 PM
black is Beautiful indeed....because of our history this is what we need....more strong sisters like you to lead us on....after all, the woman is our backbone....so very Beautiful ms lady and I think you will really appreciate "Sounds of Blackness"....I just posted it....;)
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July 30, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Hi Eric, thank you for stopping by and for your high praises and compliments for this piece which mean a lot to me! I will most definitely check out "Sounds of Blackness!" Have a great day, my friend! Pandita
Lindley Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 11:03 PM
I just found this beautiful piece my friend. So much said in so few words. Most creative writing. A7
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July 29, 2015 at 9:44 AM
My dear Robert, I really appreciate your high praises, compliments, and rating. Thank you so much! Have a beautiful day, my friend! Pandita
Carroll Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Well done Pandita.. Thanks for directing me to this gem of a write..
Sietesantos Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 8:02 PM
Hi Ken, thank you for stopping by and for reading this piece. I am happy you enjoyed it! Have a great evening, my friend! Pandita
Hunjeri Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 2:55 AM
I dont know how i missed this fine art. But am glad ive read it. It just made my day!!!! Congrats on this win!
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July 26, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Dear Njeri, I am so glad you stopped by and selected this piece to read. I very much appreciate your encouragement, support, and lovely compliments! Always the best to you! Pandita
Johnson Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 10:43 PM
I truly enjoyed this fine write.
Sietesantos Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:17 PM
Hi Michael, I am so happy you enjoyed reading this piece and I so appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you very much! Pandita
A   Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 11:54 PM
PANDITA, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Sietesantos Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Hi Linda, you're so sweet for leaving me this lovely congratulations. Thank you kindly! Pandita
Guzzi Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 7:46 PM
So nice to read your poetry this evening. Light & Love
Sietesantos Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, Debbie, for the excellent compliment! Enjoy a delightful evening! Pandita
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 4:33 PM
The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats
Sietesantos Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Sara, I really appreciate your high praises and compliments. Thank you so much! Pandita
Callus Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Hi Pandita! I love both title and poem. This is one of the best entries which I have read. You made maximum use of the waltz form. ~ Congratulations on a very merited win. // paul
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July 21, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Dear Paul, I so very much appreciate your wonderful encouragement, support, and lovely compliments which really warmed my heart and brightened my day! Have an enjoyable week! Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:34 PM
a very well deserved win, and big congrats to you.
Sietesantos Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Hi Andie, thank you for stopping by and for your high praises for this piece which means a lot to me! Enjoy a wonderful week!
A  Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Pandita, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT
Sietesantos Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 6:59 PM
Hi SKAT A, you're so sweet for leaving me this lovely congratulations. Thank you kindly! Pandita
Mandani Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 2:17 PM
This is good. Congrats.
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July 19, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Hi Abdul, I really appreciate your high praises and compliments. Thank you so much! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:49 PM
I am happy to see this on the winners list! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Beautiful write, my friend! Kika
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July 19, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Hi Kika, it is always lovely to hear from you. Thank you so much. Pandita
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 7:31 AM
tweet's away
Sietesantos Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:22 PM
YEAH! Thank you so much, Scott! Warmest regards. Pandita
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 5:07 AM
I loved your take on the theme first time I read it - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:37 PM
Dear Jan, I so very much appreciate your continued encouragement, support, and lovely compliments! Always the best to you! Pandita
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:28 AM
Beautiful write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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July 19, 2015 at 1:35 PM
Hi Eve, it is always lovely to hear from you. Thank you so much. Pandita
Carter Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Love your poem... Congrats !
Sietesantos Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Thank you so much, dear Lee, for your kind congratulations and compliments! All the best. Pandita
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 10:51 PM
Pandita, this is a beautiful, descriptive write, that flows so smoothly. Congrats on your 2nd place win and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim
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July 19, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Dear Kim, I am so thrilled that you deemed this piece worthy of such a placement! It was a pleasure to participate in such a challenging contest! Thank you for the opportunity! Warmest regards. Pandita
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