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Black Beauty

Black Beauty a highbred horse was born to kind masters, as a colt with his mother he ran faster and faster; he was beautiful and shiny black with a star on his head, soon, he was sold and leaving his mom filled him with dread. Beauty is growing very handsome into his adulthood, in the next stall to his a lovely chestnut mare, Ginger stood; and a pretty dappled grey pony called Merrylegs on the other side, days spent in a lovely meadow with stream they would run free and untied. Black Beauty would know ten homes in his life, some were kind but most filled his existence with great agony and strife; a bad fall had ruined his knees and he was no longer desired, his beauty faded because of his flaw and he was no longer admired. But, Beauty always maintained his faithfulness and obedience to all, courageous all his life even when made to pull coal carts and uphill haul; until he could not anymore and fell a broken horse and used up, the star on his forehead covered with coal dirt like make-up. Being sold again, he looked pathetic and no one wanted him, his head down he had no happiness and would accept a fate grim; until a old familiar voice of great kindness woke a memory, bringing images of love and nobility, beautiful, lovely and feathery. "I have nothing to fear and here my story ends. My troubles are over and I am home. " Quote by _ Black Beauty, the narrator of Anna Sewell's novel, 1877 _____________________ October 2, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/Black Beauty Copyright Protected, ID 10-1392-557-02 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, A Notable Horse sponsor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 10/14/2021 Second Place

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Date: 10/23/2021 5:16:00 PM
I remember the story of Black Beauty so well, Constance: You have captured it beautifully in your poeticlines. best, SuZ
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Constance La France
Date: 10/24/2021 1:12:00 PM
Suzanne, I love the story of Black Beauty too, even now and thanks for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/15/2021 1:48:00 PM
The story of Black Beauty is so memorable and up-lifting - especially at the end! It is an amazing allegory for life and a powerful metaphor illustrating determination and redemption! Wonderful re-telling of this classic Constance. Congratulations! Blessings!
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Date: 10/15/2021 2:07:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, my Mom would read me the story and make me promise to not cry when Ginger dies but I always did, Beauty endured so much pain in his life just like people do ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/15/2021 4:17:00 AM
I adored Black Beauty! Amazing, I actually had a horse who looked like him, but his name was Cody. Love this. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2021 6:37:00 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the compliment, your comment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/15/2021 2:51:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I learned a valuable "horse-lesson" today. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2021 6:38:00 AM
Beata, thanks for the compliment and congrats and comment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/5/2021 3:58:00 PM
Hello Constance ... it's a great story made into a time honoured movie, and your verse does it proud - thank you Constance - Lindsay
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Constance La France
Date: 10/6/2021 7:11:00 AM
Lindsay, thanks for visiting and for the comment and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/2/2021 6:58:00 PM
Constance, a parable of life all too familiar for many, well done!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/3/2021 6:49:00 AM
James, thanks for the compliment and comment, the message in the book was kindness to animals and people ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/2/2021 12:07:00 PM
Hello Constance, Black Beauty is a beautiful horse. Went through a lot and now has a good home. Serenity & Love Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/3/2021 11:22:00 AM
Hello Constance, you are welcome Constance. Love & Serenity Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 10/2/2021 5:25:00 PM
Darlene, thanks for the visit and comment ~ love and serenity _Constance

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