Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Black and White

United Colours: Black and White
Sponsor: Silent One


Your tune
sweeps me
so high
and free
but then
I hear
B sharp
with tears
and in
sweet trance
I swoon
in dance
with your
souls notes
while your
voice floats
on the
soft strings
as a
bird sings
you still
move me
with black
and white
grand keys

***I used picture number one for this poem***

~Date Written: March 6, 2016~

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Jai Bankson March 14, 2016 at 2:38 AM Very smooth,congrats on the win..In the words of Mr. Lee''Be like water my friend''nailed it

CayCay Godwin March 11, 2016 at 9:50 AM Excellent job of flow and content considering the limited syllable count. I missed this contest, but what a fun challenge! And you met this challenge with a beautifully creative and emotional write. Great job, LuLo - and congrats on your deserved win ... CayCay Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 11:57 AM Thank you sweet CayCay :) You are the best...:)-luloo *Smiles* *thanks*

Angeline Haikutwinkle March 11, 2016 at 8:37 AM This poem paints a wonderful picture of love. Interesting take on this. Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 9:39 AM Thank you Angeline :)-luloo

Joanna Daniel March 11, 2016 at 6:41 AM This one is so nice combining music and love. Great job and congratulations on top place win:) Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 9:39 AM Thank you Jo...-luloo :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 11, 2016 at 2:33 AM Brilliant take Laura... congrats on great win with these lovely words.. Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 9:38 AM Thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo

Timothy Hicks March 10, 2016 at 9:15 PM Back again ... I thought this would place high, and so it did. Congrats :) Beautiful Scars March 11, 2016 at 9:37 AM Thank you Timothy :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2016 at 8:58 PM this is gorgeous, and if it won high, I can see WHY!!! Congrats Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 9:09 PM Thank you Andrea very much :)-luloo

Laura Leiser March 10, 2016 at 7:13 PM Congrats on your top win, Laura :) Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 9:08 PM Thank you Laura very much :)-luloo

Eve Roper March 10, 2016 at 5:07 PM Back to congratulate you on your 1st place win :) way to go girl Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 6:22 PM Many thanks Eve. You are a big sweetheart always....-luloo *smiles*

Vladislav Raven March 10, 2016 at 4:52 PM My apologies Luloo, i have done it again, said i was given you a seven and forgot to put the rating in. Here we go....Vlad. Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 6:21 PM Your silly, thank you again...-luloo

Vladislav Raven March 10, 2016 at 4:50 PM Hi Luloo, Congratulations in your first place win in the contest. I so enjoyed the read. I was swept up in the emotion of your write and my Soul took to the wing to dance within the stars. A beautiful, Soulful write Luloo. A seven and into my faves....Vlad. Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 6:20 PM Vlad, thank you for all your kind words and nice compliments. You are very sweet. Have a good night-luloo *smiles*

Brian Davey March 10, 2016 at 3:38 PM Congratulations Laura, well deserved Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 6:18 PM Thank you Brian...-luloo *smiles*

Janice Canerdy March 10, 2016 at 1:32 PM Excellent, Jan. Congratulations! Janice Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 2:52 PM Lol! I've done the same thing before no worries! Thank you -luloo *smiles* Janice Canerdy March 10, 2016 at 1:33 PM OOPS! Make that congrats to Laura! Janice

Connie Marcum Wong March 10, 2016 at 1:09 PM Yay! You are at the top and so deserve to be. I loved your entry luloo! Congratulations my friend! #7 Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 2:51 PM Thank you once again Connie-luloo *smiles*

Sam Jameson March 10, 2016 at 12:57 PM Very smooth-- nice flow. Congratulations, luloo, on the podium spot-- a job well done. Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 2:47 PM Thank you Sam...-luloo *smiles*

Paul Callus March 10, 2016 at 12:01 PM A musical and romantic take which truly merited placing first, Laura. Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 12:21 PM Many thanks Paul :) -luloo *smiles*

Anindya Mohan Tagore March 10, 2016 at 11:48 AM Luloo, I'm in trance. Congrats on this wonderful top spot win. Hugs, Bobby Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 12:20 PM Bobby thank you very much *smiles*~luloo

Suzanne Delaney March 10, 2016 at 11:22 AM Congratulations on a sweeping win. Hugs, SuZ Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 12:19 PM Suz, thank you very much:) -luloo *smiles*

Constance La France March 10, 2016 at 10:57 AM Laura, back to say, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful win ~ Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 12:17 PM BW, thank you very much...-luloo :)-*smiles*

Anisha Dutta March 10, 2016 at 10:20 AM Congrats Laura to win on top Love. Anisha D Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 12:15 PM Thank you Anisha:) -luloo*smiles*

Winged Warrior March 10, 2016 at 9:51 AM You won...again!...congrats Laura...^WW^ Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 12:15 PM Thank you WW -luloo:) -*smiles*

Charlie Smith March 10, 2016 at 9:21 AM It danced. Congratulations on the win... Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 12:13 PM Thank you Charlie -luloo*smiles*

Sandra Haight March 10, 2016 at 8:50 AM Beautifully done, Laura! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sanda Beautiful Scars March 10, 2016 at 9:03 AM Thank you Sandra very much for all your kind feedback :)-luloo*smiles*

Connie Marcum Wong March 8, 2016 at 7:49 PM Oh luloo, you did a splendid job on this difficult form! Your entry should place high! #7 Beautiful Scars March 8, 2016 at 8:51 PM Thank you very much sweet lady :)-luloo

Ingrid Showalter Swift March 8, 2016 at 1:32 AM Very cool photo image and love captured in your word notes! Beautiful Scars March 8, 2016 at 8:51 PM thank you Ingrid :)-luloo

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